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Soul Mates! Anyone enjoying these? Please? Thoughts?
Iffin anyone's got critique I'd love to hear it. Don't need a big dumb critique box you have to pay for to tell me how you feel!
i love you guys please come back to me
Meet Dwight, office Dullard. Just as Shirley from the previous strip, this guy originates from ~ShenTsumi's side of the development, way back when we did it. B-But I got characters! You'll see! Mark's my character. There's his glossy poster.
There's a story behind that poster that will be told someday.
OH and ~FunkyAl wrote all those emails!
Iffin anyone's got critique I'd love to hear it. Don't need a big dumb critique box you have to pay for to tell me how you feel!
i love you guys please come back to me
Meet Dwight, office Dullard. Just as Shirley from the previous strip, this guy originates from ~ShenTsumi's side of the development, way back when we did it. B-But I got characters! You'll see! Mark's my character. There's his glossy poster.
There's a story behind that poster that will be told someday.
OH and ~FunkyAl wrote all those emails!
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I thought the emails were kinda funny/cute, but I didn't find the joke all that funny. I mean, I get it: skeleton talking about boners, but eh. For some reason it just reads awkwardly. Perhaps it's because it's hard to read Clark's expressions since he doesn't have a face? I get that he's unamused due to what he says in the second line, but... augh I don't know. It's hard to put my finger on it.
I'd like to see another page of this. Maybe then I could phrase it better and in a much more "critique" fashion. Sorry for the jumbled mess above.
Either way, I did find the text in the speech bubbles to be too big. With the already heavy lines on the characters, I think the bubbles should be smaller.
I'd like to see another page of this. Maybe then I could phrase it better and in a much more "critique" fashion. Sorry for the jumbled mess above.
Either way, I did find the text in the speech bubbles to be too big. With the already heavy lines on the characters, I think the bubbles should be smaller.